benjaz
Pacificateur Zimmerien
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Registered: 3-11-2010 Member Is Offline Mood:
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| posted on 7-3-2011 at 06:05 |
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Please give feed back on this, What do you think I should improve?
Hey fellows;
Please help me improve my work. What do you think I should improve?
http://snd.sc/e7cuA0
Thanks
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PatronusV2
Pacificateur Zimmerien
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Registered: 21-2-2011 Member Is Offline Mood:
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| posted on 17-3-2011 at 16:18 |
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Hi!
nice work! But there are a few things I would work on.
In my opinion the beginning is to abstract....less is more you know 
At 2:03 you could improve the transfer because the drums are coming to hard.
Hope this will help you!
PS: Would be nice, if you comment my video too...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1f8tP40i4oU&feature=channel_video_title
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